Notes

After an open critique some interesting points were raised and I had reached some conclusions for my own work.

Firstly the concept of human movement, a) that we as humans do not move in a straight line

b) we have the tendency to explore

Therefore the 'straight' lines that I had used for the corridor would need to be changed. Instead I used a zig zag graphic surrounded by shading to show the possible movements of the human.

For the courtyard and matrix parti, straight lines will work the best as the clearly define the space.